Each person will write 5 simple sentences.
Once they are completed, you will finish the simple sentence by adding a FANBOYS word (or other conjunction) and make it into a compound sentence.
Highlight: Noun Verb FANBOYS
One day batman was tried and was not happy so he thought some nice quiet time wound help
So he jumped in his batmobile and zoomed off. Then some light caught his eye and he pulled into a car park to have a look but then he saw a cute little cafe. He ran in ding went the door he chose a table and waited impatiently for a lady to come round and get his order when she did he sat up srati and said a coffee please. Ummm ok said the lady then she hurried away to get him a coffee. He thought he would have a look around so he found a self of magazines he chose one and took it over to his table to read it. Then the lady came back with a coffee and a cheese scone that was for free. So he gladly took it and sat reading the magazine and drinking the coffee. THE END
Charlotte, I love your story about Batman! You made this 'superhero' very relatable by wanting a coffee and a scone! I loved all of the verbs you used in your writing - "zoomed", "impatiently" "hurried" - they made your story very interesting to read! Great job!!
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