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Tuesday, May 25, 2021

reading

 this is my create tasks that i did this is my WALT:use prior knowledge when making text to text combinations. This week i read the book Paekakariki flood. it was about a girl called Ama and how she and her mum survived a flood. there Dad was away with her. It happen in the night time

7 comments:

  1. Hi Charlotte your blog post is cool but maybe next time you could have a description on your blog post and copy and paste the first create task like where suppose to.

    Kind regards Elise.

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  2. hey charlotte i am charlotte to love it ok bye

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  3. Hi charlottte
    I like how you did your second create task :D
    next time dont put the first create task on and add more stuff on the news papper report like some more iformaiton :D
    -Monica

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    1. i mean *charlotte *paper *information
      spelling mistakes lol :D

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  4. Hello Charlotte
    I like the background for your poster. Maybe next time have capital letters.

    From Aeryn

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  5. Hi Charlotte, great blog post, I really like your newspaper article informing people not to go on holiday in Paekariki, that is great advice. In your 1st create task, next time could you retell the story in your own words in a little more detail. Great work Charlotte. Michelle

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  6. Hi Charlotte,
    Great blogging! You have given some great advice on your poster, about 'What to do in a flood'. I will certainly take these tips on board if i'm ever in a flood. Which tip do you think is the most important one? Just a reminder before blogging that you proof read your work. Good work!

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